Does this have Sentence errors in it?

Well, this is just a suggestion, but try to not use 'many' two times in one sentence. It is a sketchy substitute for a certain amount of whatever it is you are talking about, and if anything, sounds repetitive. In your last sentence "Hawthorne's dark style of writing takes ideas from his families association..."

Families should be family's. (I had to do an essay on Nathaniel Hawthorne too; good luck!)

try this: Authors use many different influences in the way they write, and Nathaniel Hawthorn was no exception. Hawthorne's family and religion have influenced his works greatly. His dark style of writing stems both from his family's association with Puritanism and from his own personal experiences in dealing this association.

You have used the present tense where the past would be more appropriate. Neither Hawthorne nor his family is doing much of anything these days. Also, it's grammAr!

Use the same tense throughout. Past tense seems to be more correct than present tense in this sentence.

BTW, grammAr.

-The first sentence sounds too repetitive

-The second sentence should replace "was" with "is"

-Use a synonym for influence for the second sentence

-Take out the s in "takes" in the third sentense

-"family's", not "families"

-Put 'with' between 'dealing' and 'it'

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