Can you help me with my English Essay about Canada?

Hello! I wrote an essay about Canada for my english class and I need some help with my grammar and my sentences form. Thank you!!!

Canada

Canada is a great country that is absolutely worth to be visited. The magnificent vast country offers many interesting and charming cities and there are many beautiful landscapes that are breathtaking.

There are several cities in Canada that are as friendly as energetic. Lets take for example the city of Montreal. It’s a great idea to go for a walk on Saint-Denis Street if you want to take your time during your journey, drink a coffee while reading the local newspaper. But there is also Sainte-Catherine Street, the busiest street in the city, which is packed with shopping lovers and the most popular fashionable stores. The cities in Canada are mostly appreciated because they offer different types of activities depending on your daily mood, which make Canada a great country to visit because it is suitable of everyone.

Canada is known for its many landscapes, often appreciated by nature lovers, sportive people and photographers. For example, the city of Vancouver is about two hours far from Whistler. Whistler is known for it’s ski mountain, called ‘’Whistler-Blackcomb”. You can do ski, trekking, kayak, camping and many other activities and all those activities offers you fantastic landscapes, because Whistler is surrounded by the nature, so the landscapes are not hard to find! Which is really great with Canada, is that its cities are most of the time located next to a landscape point. Like Vancouver, Montreal offers the Laurentians, Halifax is known for its whales and the Niagara Falls are next to Toronto. The landscapes in Canada are not only beautiful, but they are also mostly located next to a big city, so Canada is worth to be visited because you have the possibility to have access to amazing landscapes, while being located near the city.

The landscapes and the cities in Canada makes the country charming and attracting and this is why it makes it worth to be visited by everyone.