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My poem dedicated to my angel, what do you think?
When I'll see your face
I will know you were my destiny
I will know you come with grace
And that you're blessed for eternity
When I'll see your eyes
I'll know you are my dream
I'll know why there was so many cries
I'll know better than to scream
When I'll see your smile
I'll know why life matter so much
I'll feel the sensation of joy for a while
I'll comfort you with a gentle touch
When I'll hear you cry
I'll know that you're mine
And i'll teach you not to lie
And how to write these lines
When I'll hold you in my arm
I'll know I have to keep you secure
To cuddle you and keep you warm
I'll keep you safe for sure
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- il y a 1 décennieRéponse favorite
Waw... this is fantastic! but for a guardian angle? it sounds more for like a son, daughter, of a husband, mother. If you want somthing more angelical then you might want to expand the vocabulary or enlarge with your words in your poems. like this for example:
...
you-- you keep me safe from all dark corners.
You are the only one that hears my laments,
you-- you are.
My guardian angle.
